Elevator Pitch, Pt. 2
Feedback: I listened to feedback in that I improved the quality of the video. I stood up and attempted to be more energetic about the product. In the last video, I wasn't super engaged with what I was saying, so in this one I tried to appear more excited.
What I Changed: I improved the video quality from the first one to this one. I also changed the scenery and actually stood up and got more engaged with this second pitch. I tried to be more energetic about the product in order to sell it to potential investors. Furthermore, I put a stronger emphasis on the quality and production of the product. I wanted to make it clearer to investors that this company will be different from other t-shirt companies and I attempted to explain how we will go about this.
Hey there. Great job! This was better than the first one in my opinion because of how excited you were when presenting your idea, I do think it is a great idea. I like you stated how you were going to differentiate yourself from other manufacturers and suppliers which is key to being a successful entrepreneur. This could have been on Shark Tank I feel.
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ReplyDeleteI really like how you coordinated the video. Your hook was fantastic and I love the way you expressed your gestures. Body language really stood out to me in this video. I really like how your voice is also super enthusiastic. Many people wanted to rush this assignment and can't wait to get this done, but I think you took your time into making this.
Hi Megan, I think you did a great job responding to the feedback from the first version of this assignment. Your background is bright and you definitely feel involved and invested in the company. I like that you are making it clear that you will not be like most other companies, it is easy to find a company and just copy them. Keep making this your own!
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