Good job Morgan. I like how you included that you have already conducted interviews to prove that this product is in demand and that it could be successful, great thinking! I like your hook that you used to get the listener interested in the video. I really think that this can be successful. The only critique I have is with the audio of the video I don't know if it was my computer or what but that was the only critique I had.
I absolutely love your opening hook to get buyer’s attention. I personally hate searching for hours at the mall and thrift stores for the perfect top. I usually fall victim to the overpriced low-quality clothing. You did an excellent job elaborating on the details of your business idea. Placing managers on the outsourced manufacturing plant’s site should result in better quality clothing by the manufacturing plant.
Great pitch Morgan! You really got my attention at the beginning and you backed up your claims with very professional and detailed specifics. I still would be highly interested in your company! Searching through thrift stores can be fun, but it gets old fast. Your quality control methods could really be what sets you apart from other companies. Nice work and keep going with your idea!
Good job Morgan. I like how you included that you have already conducted interviews to prove that this product is in demand and that it could be successful, great thinking! I like your hook that you used to get the listener interested in the video. I really think that this can be successful. The only critique I have is with the audio of the video I don't know if it was my computer or what but that was the only critique I had.
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love your opening hook to get buyer’s attention. I personally hate searching for hours at the mall and thrift stores for the perfect top. I usually fall victim to the overpriced low-quality clothing. You did an excellent job elaborating on the details of your business idea. Placing managers on the outsourced manufacturing plant’s site should result in better quality clothing by the manufacturing plant.
ReplyDeleteGreat pitch Morgan! You really got my attention at the beginning and you backed up your claims with very professional and detailed specifics. I still would be highly interested in your company! Searching through thrift stores can be fun, but it gets old fast. Your quality control methods could really be what sets you apart from other companies. Nice work and keep going with your idea!
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